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What am I





The pavement is my skin,

where I lay and seek, New comers



with dreams of the good-life, and all the delights that I keep.



Heartless beings, with plots of fulfilling my dastardly deeds.



As I lay waiting for the light to vanish and be gone,



Where I give you the feeling of no tomorrow.



Promise that you’ll never leave me,

As long as there’s no hope around, you’ll always need me.



Drippings of blood trickle on my skin; as my recruits official become “In”



I’ll give you anything you like, just promise me, you’ll be mines for the rest of the night.



I gave you a place to stay when life wasn’t going your way,



still you had thoughts of leaving me for a career.



Even though I felt betrayed, McDonald’s couldn’t keep you away.



You see, where inseparable just face it,



you need my presence, just as much as I need your hatred.



Everything the other night was beautifully executed to my delight.



As Sanitation removes the smears from the other night… as another day begins tonight.



The aroma of death is felt when I need to feel complete



addictions of syringes, miscreant acts, and drugs,



All show me the side of life, that my followers have come to love.



I give Kids the feeling of no restrain, showing them; fiat notes, young damsels, and unlimited amount of fame.



Mothers serve as my cleansing,



as blood trickles drops at the crime scene on my skin,



desperate for answers, but I don’t know answer to him.



I have the sewers for a throat,

concrete for a tongue, with parallel lines that leads no one.



As the innocent proceed with caution, as my disciples lurk,



Innate directions,

to escort holy beings to their coffins



I am…… The Streets.What would you rate this Poem? Do you think it's good?
I rate it: 9/10 i really like this, i am a big poet myself i love to write! But then i would have given you a ten out of ten but to me its more of a riddle but then i understand the poem part about it.





Good or bad: Good job i really like it!